Onyx Storm: Chapter 1
Jan. 25th, 2025 05:51 pmI will not die today.
I will save him.
—Violet Sorrengail’s personal addendum
to the Book of Brennan
Meh. I get what this chapter's opening quote is trying to do, but have we ever gotten the set up that Violet addends the Book of Brennan? Would this not be more effective on the page? Yes, it would be. And actually it was on the page during the prologue explicitly, so I don't need the reminder at the beginning of chapter 1.
( at least there's plot )